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:lol:

And now for some OC.. or something
I kinda meant to draw her (Rakashk, my Khajiit character from Oblivion) as I think she'd look right after coming out of jail... but then I got crazy :lol: so yea I guess... well at least it's something!

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:icongloomyunderwoods:
Now I'm in the mood for a sun bath too. Too bad it's cold autumn now. :XD:

This picture is cute, I especially like how you managed to stress the light's warm on her body.

The only critique I can give is to find a way to make the lineart look more smooth. It doesn't seem to harmonize with anything else in the picture because it looks so sketchy. And sorta scratchy.

I made some tutorials about the basics about how I do cartoon-like pictures (lineart, coloring, shading, etc) If you wana check them out... [link] [link] [link]
:icondraakh:
=) thanks.
I kinda like the lines :XD: if you think it doesnt fit in, maybe I should do some lines around the background thingies instead...
Personally I'm not a big fan of the celshading type of colouring.. I just liked the strong-light effect here.

:o oh shit... one of her feet floats in the air... funny :XD:
Anyway thank for the comment and critique! =) much appreciated
:icongloomyunderwoods:
I don't know, maybe it's just me.
Yes, the thing about doing these lines in the background might work as well. :)

But you did do cel shading here. :o
:icondraakh:
only the light, the shadows are actually a bit more blended :XD: plus yea the p...edistals? are kinda lame and sloppy too I guess... deh :XD:
:iconcarlota:
Fantastic ! :wow:
I love the light, the pose, the nonchalant attitude... :clap:

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:iconstrong-rad:
Sexy!

She definitely looks like a runner. The length of the legs are really the focus of the piece; the lime green pants and the lanky length both bring that about. That two-step posture she has while leaning back is almost like she is displaying them to the sunlight and open air. Strange how the pant on the left leg is tied to the calf while the other one is free, but they are lean and long--perfect for sprinting.

The sunlight runs over the shirtand pants matching the sketchy fold lines, and you even appropriately change the tones for the brown fur and the green pants.

Her profile is smooth, angular, and elegant. There is just enough of a "stalk" in the bridge of her nose toshow the hint of the shortened muzzle that she would have if the anthro balance was more in favor ofher animalian side.

The gradient in the background is especially smooth and meticulous. The only thing I question is the thin, stony pillars in the background. They look uncomfortable to rest on, and even perilous. :faint: Well done :salute:

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:iconqueensown-ladywolf:
What is her foot resting on..? That's my only problem..
IT AWESOMES!

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:icondraakh:
lol yea :XD: I realized when answering the first comment =P just came home so I'm gonna fix that soon.
THANKIES!
:icondraakh:
thank you so much! =)

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